this is really goodmy only suggestion would be to stage the subject or rather person he's talking to, it would help read his performance betterfor example, his eye direction, for me personally i can only guess it's direction until the very end when he looks at the object in his handother than that i this is one of the best ones i've seen(better than mine was)-King
wow, thanks. i'll definately work on staging the characters in future stuff.
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this is really good
my only suggestion would be to stage the subject or rather person he's talking to, it would help read his performance better
for example, his eye direction, for me personally i can only guess it's direction until the very end when he looks at the object in his hand
other than that i this is one of the best ones i've seen
(better than mine was)
-King
wow, thanks. i'll definately work on staging the characters in future stuff.
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